My first Sprite Sheet (Hope it's good) :P

[GrooveMan.exe]

Either way, this sheet is nowhere near submission quality. It has no shading, the edit of the base sprite is incredibly sloppy, and you seem to be under the impression that blocky lines made in MS Paint work fine for special effects.

Essentially, you're trying to reach something way above your station for your skill level. Try something much simpler - or at the very least try to get a single sprite of this correct before making an entire sheet.