So I painted my shoes

[Chutzpar]

Those are pretty cool actually.

I don't know how easy it is to layer acrylic pens (never used them!) but I'd suggest, if you can, going over the red/orange parts again, they're looking kinda streaky to me.

Generally it's better to start with a white shoe. I find that acrylic paint or fabric paint on canvas shoes tends to have the best results :>