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as guy said - i love the design of that ref of yours

but again, i have an edit to present

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for the folds, you're gonna wanna make few of them in pixelart, but really follow the seams of the fabric and it should look ok
(besides something as thick as a leather jacket doesn't usually have loads of folds)

i added a bit of outlining to the eyes, it makes em more readible at 1x res i feel

I made the back arm longer, and folded it more, to suit the pose better

and for the legs, i get what you were trying to go for
although i think a pose like that, with feet facing together, is somewhat unbalanced - or at least somewhat feminine, it doesn't suit the character well.
so without changing too much, i tried to make the knees more visible and turned the right foot
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2017 Work/Critque Thread - by Virtuaboy123 - 01-27-2017, 07:51 PM
RE: 2017 Work/Critque Thread - by TomGuycott - 01-27-2017, 09:08 PM
RE: 2017 Work/Critque Thread - by Gors - 01-30-2017, 06:24 AM
RE: 2017 Work/Critque Thread - by Virtuaboy123 - 01-30-2017, 01:11 PM
RE: 2017 Work/Critque Thread - by Virtuaboy123 - 02-01-2017, 01:41 PM
RE: 2017 Work/Critque Thread - by Cloud6625 - 02-01-2017, 02:10 PM
RE: 2017 Work/Critque Thread - by Virtuaboy123 - 02-01-2017, 06:01 PM
RE: 2017 Work/Critque Thread - by Lexou Duck - 02-01-2017, 08:19 PM
RE: 2017 Work/Critque Thread - by Virtuaboy123 - 02-01-2017, 09:00 PM
RE: 2017 Work/Critque Thread - by Virtuaboy123 - 02-02-2017, 09:28 PM
RE: 2017 Work/Critque Thread - by Guy - 02-02-2017, 09:55 PM
RE: 2017 Work/Critque Thread - by Virtuaboy123 - 02-03-2017, 08:35 AM
RE: 2017 Work/Critque Thread - by Lexou Duck - 02-03-2017, 02:02 PM
RE: 2017 Work/Critque Thread - by Virtuaboy123 - 02-04-2017, 05:37 AM
RE: 2017 Work/Critque Thread - by Guy - 02-06-2017, 12:05 AM
RE: 2017 Work/Critque Thread - by Virtuaboy123 - 02-05-2017, 05:42 PM
RE: 2017 Work/Critque Thread - by x0_000 - 02-05-2017, 11:16 PM
RE: 2017 Work/Critque Thread - by Virtuaboy123 - 02-06-2017, 01:31 AM
RE: 2017 Work/Critque Thread - by Virtuaboy123 - 02-06-2017, 05:11 PM
RE: 2017 Work/Critque Thread - by Virtuaboy123 - 02-07-2017, 06:31 PM
RE: 2017 Work/Critque Thread - by Virtuaboy123 - 02-10-2017, 10:42 AM
RE: 2017 Work/Critque Thread - by Virtuaboy123 - 02-17-2017, 05:27 PM
RE: 2017 Work/Critque Thread - by Virtuaboy123 - 02-24-2017, 10:16 PM
RE: 2017 Work/Critque Thread - by Virtuaboy123 - 03-14-2017, 02:51 PM
RE: 2017 Work/Critque Thread - by miyabi95_ - 03-14-2017, 02:55 PM
RE: 2017 Work/Critque Thread - by Virtuaboy123 - 03-14-2017, 10:04 PM
RE: 2017 Work/Critque Thread - by Gors - 03-15-2017, 09:30 AM
RE: 2017 Work/Critque Thread - by Virtuaboy123 - 04-15-2017, 12:34 AM
RE: 2017 Work/Critque Thread - by Virtuaboy123 - 04-15-2017, 12:58 PM
RE: 2017 Work/Critque Thread - by Virtuaboy123 - 04-15-2017, 03:46 PM
RE: 2017 Work/Critque Thread - by Lexou Duck - 04-24-2017, 10:14 AM
RE: 2017 Work/Critque Thread - by x0_000 - 04-24-2017, 12:44 PM
RE: 2017 Work/Critque Thread - by Gors - 04-26-2017, 07:24 AM
RE: 2017 Work/Critque Thread - by Virtuaboy123 - 04-26-2017, 06:34 AM
RE: 2017 Work/Critque Thread - by x0_000 - 04-26-2017, 06:18 PM
RE: 2017 Work/Critque Thread - by Virtuaboy123 - 06-02-2017, 08:40 AM

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