01-18-2016, 03:43 PM
(This post was last modified: 01-18-2016, 03:44 PM by DragonDePlatino.)
What you've got so far is really fantastic, Gors! You handled your perspective quite well and everything is brimming detail. Though, maybe a little too much detail in some places...
The table sheet patterns are really noisy and the outlines of the seated characters blend in with the chairs. I'd suggest widening the gaps between the seats/tables and widening the cushions by a pixel or two. The pattern on the green wall doesn't work very well with the perspective, either. To me, it looks like it's floating off the wall independent of the perspective. A design with horizontal lines rather than vertical might clear that up.
The table sheet patterns are really noisy and the outlines of the seated characters blend in with the chairs. I'd suggest widening the gaps between the seats/tables and widening the cushions by a pixel or two. The pattern on the green wall doesn't work very well with the perspective, either. To me, it looks like it's floating off the wall independent of the perspective. A design with horizontal lines rather than vertical might clear that up.