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Work/Criticism
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I'm not fond of her nose, it kind of looks like it's at the wrong angle. Shouldn't the lighting run along the bridge due to the elevation?

Got a couple of qualms about the arm on the right. I think the shading is a bit excessive around the elbow area, there's something off about it.

The right line of her forearm also seems to have a little too much AA, makes it seem a little banded. I think the upper line of her panties also looks a little jittery due to the sel-out. Certainly not as smooth as, say, her face.

Tbh though, I'm mostly grasping here and thought it unfortunate your topic wasn't getting attention. I really like your work!
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Work/Criticism - by Virtuaboy123 - 12-21-2012, 07:07 PM
RE: Work/Criticism - by Bombshell93 - 12-21-2012, 08:39 PM
RE: Work/Criticism - by Virtuaboy123 - 12-21-2012, 08:44 PM
RE: Work/Criticism - by Virtuaboy123 - 12-22-2012, 12:30 PM
RE: Work/Criticism - by OverlordNext - 12-22-2012, 12:33 PM
RE: Work/Criticism - by Gors - 12-22-2012, 02:28 PM
RE: Work/Criticism - by Gaia - 12-22-2012, 04:32 PM
RE: Work/Criticism - by Ran Master 27 - 12-23-2012, 02:00 AM
RE: Work/Criticism - by Ran Master 27 - 12-23-2012, 04:08 AM
RE: Work/Criticism - by Gors - 12-23-2012, 07:59 AM
RE: Work/Criticism - by Virtuaboy123 - 12-23-2012, 01:23 PM
RE: Work/Criticism - by Ran Master 27 - 12-23-2012, 01:47 PM
RE: Work/Criticism - by Gaia - 12-23-2012, 07:15 PM
RE: Work/Criticism - by Chris2Balls [:B] - 12-23-2012, 07:44 PM
RE: Work/Criticism - by Virtuaboy123 - 12-23-2012, 10:50 PM
RE: Work/Criticism - by Sengir - 12-23-2012, 10:55 PM
RE: Work/Criticism - by Gors - 12-23-2012, 11:01 PM
RE: Work/Criticism - by Virtuaboy123 - 12-24-2012, 09:16 PM
RE: Work/Criticism - by Ton - 12-25-2012, 01:48 AM
RE: Work/Criticism - by Ran Master 27 - 12-25-2012, 04:51 AM
RE: Work/Criticism - by Virtuaboy123 - 12-27-2012, 01:25 PM
RE: Work/Criticism - by BynineB - 12-27-2012, 01:42 PM
RE: Work/Criticism - by Gors - 12-27-2012, 02:13 PM
RE: Work/Criticism - by Chris2Balls [:B] - 12-27-2012, 05:06 PM
RE: Work/Criticism - by Ran Master 27 - 12-29-2012, 01:05 AM
RE: Work/Criticism - by Virtuaboy123 - 01-03-2013, 06:38 PM
RE: Work/Criticism - by Gors - 01-03-2013, 07:13 PM
RE: Work/Criticism - by Virtuaboy123 - 01-08-2013, 10:20 PM
RE: Work/Criticism - by maarten - 01-08-2013, 02:09 PM
RE: Work/Criticism - by maarten - 01-09-2013, 12:11 PM
RE: Work/Criticism - by Lexou Duck - 01-09-2013, 03:37 PM
RE: Work/Criticism - by Virtuaboy123 - 01-19-2013, 08:12 PM
RE: Work/Criticism - by Virtuaboy123 - 02-10-2013, 03:16 AM
RE: Work/Criticism - by Virtuaboy123 - 02-12-2013, 11:47 PM
RE: Work/Criticism - by Sengir - 02-13-2013, 01:49 AM
RE: Work/Criticism - by Previous - 02-13-2013, 01:53 AM
RE: Work/Criticism - by Ton - 02-13-2013, 02:14 AM
RE: Work/Criticism - by Novally - 02-13-2013, 03:16 AM
RE: Work/Criticism - by Virtuaboy123 - 02-13-2013, 03:40 AM
RE: Work/Criticism - by Previous - 02-13-2013, 04:35 AM
RE: Work/Criticism - by Lexou Duck - 02-13-2013, 08:31 AM
RE: Work/Criticism - by Virtuaboy123 - 02-14-2013, 01:47 AM
RE: Work/Criticism - by recme - 02-13-2013, 09:02 PM
RE: Work/Criticism - by SuperGoomba - 02-14-2013, 03:27 AM
RE: Work/Criticism - by Virtuaboy123 - 02-15-2013, 12:17 PM
RE: Work/Criticism - by Novally - 02-15-2013, 05:33 PM
RE: Work/Criticism - by Virtuaboy123 - 02-15-2013, 09:24 PM
RE: Work/Criticism - by Novally - 02-16-2013, 04:07 AM
RE: Work/Criticism - by Virtuaboy123 - 04-12-2013, 01:38 PM
RE: Work/Criticism - by Gors - 04-12-2013, 01:49 PM
RE: Work/Criticism - by Virtuaboy123 - 04-12-2013, 02:06 PM
RE: Work/Criticism - by Virtuaboy123 - 04-15-2013, 10:42 AM
RE: Work/Criticism - by Zadaben - 04-15-2013, 06:23 PM
RE: Work/Criticism - by Virtuaboy123 - 04-15-2013, 06:59 PM
RE: Work/Criticism - by Gors - 04-15-2013, 07:07 PM
RE: Work/Criticism - by Virtuaboy123 - 04-18-2013, 11:28 AM
RE: Work/Criticism - by Gors - 04-19-2013, 06:26 AM
RE: Work/Criticism - by Chris2Balls [:B] - 04-20-2013, 02:15 PM
RE: Work/Criticism - by Virtuaboy123 - 06-06-2013, 11:42 PM
RE: Work/Criticism - by hangun - 06-15-2013, 11:00 AM
RE: Work/Criticism - by Virtuaboy123 - 11-28-2013, 08:25 PM
RE: Work/Criticism - by Virtuaboy123 - 11-29-2013, 05:34 AM
RE: Work/Criticism - by Chris2Balls [:B] - 11-29-2013, 10:32 AM
RE: Work/Criticism - by E-Man - 11-29-2013, 11:01 AM
RE: Work/Criticism - by Virtuaboy123 - 11-29-2013, 02:55 PM
RE: Work/Criticism - by Kelvin - 11-29-2013, 04:02 PM
RE: Work/Criticism - by Virtuaboy123 - 11-29-2013, 04:27 PM
RE: Work/Criticism - by Gors - 11-29-2013, 07:50 PM
RE: Work/Criticism - by Virtuaboy123 - 12-11-2013, 09:10 AM
RE: Work/Criticism - by Lexou Duck - 12-11-2013, 12:52 PM
RE: Work/Criticism - by Virtuaboy123 - 12-11-2013, 01:22 PM
RE: Work/Criticism - by Virtuaboy123 - 12-12-2013, 08:39 PM
RE: Work/Criticism - by Lexou Duck - 12-14-2013, 07:11 AM
RE: Work/Criticism - by Virtuaboy123 - 12-16-2013, 08:13 PM
RE: Work/Criticism - by Virtuaboy123 - 12-20-2013, 01:51 AM
RE: Work/Criticism - by Gors - 12-20-2013, 08:05 AM
RE: Work/Criticism - by Virtuaboy123 - 12-20-2013, 10:31 PM
RE: Work/Criticism - by Gors - 12-21-2013, 05:25 AM
RE: Work/Criticism - by Lexou Duck - 12-21-2013, 11:33 AM
RE: Work/Criticism - by Virtuaboy123 - 12-22-2013, 04:56 AM
RE: Work/Criticism - by Virtuaboy123 - 03-01-2014, 05:11 PM
RE: Work/Criticism - by Iocus - 03-02-2014, 01:25 PM
RE: Work/Criticism - by Garamonde - 03-02-2014, 02:46 PM
RE: Work/Criticism - by Virtuaboy123 - 03-08-2014, 11:13 AM

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