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Criticism on my GBC sprites?
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One of the biggest issues I see is that you give Kirby a lot of straight lines even though he's meant to be shaped like a ball.
As you can see, in the circled areas you gave him more or less straight areas as opposed to curves.
It's on more than just these three frames though, so you should go through and round out the curves where needed.
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Criticism on my GBC sprites? - by Quirby64 - 01-20-2014, 02:24 PM
RE: Criticism on my GBC sprites? - by E-Man - 01-20-2014, 03:55 PM
RE: Criticism on my GBC sprites? - by Quirby64 - 01-20-2014, 04:32 PM
RE: Criticism on my GBC sprites? - by Vipershark - 01-20-2014, 05:59 PM
RE: Criticism on my GBC sprites? - by Quirby64 - 01-21-2014, 07:19 PM
RE: Criticism on my GBC sprites? - by Quirby64 - 02-08-2014, 03:30 PM
RE: Criticism on my GBC sprites? - by Kelvin - 02-08-2014, 08:55 PM
RE: Criticism on my GBC sprites? - by Garamonde - 02-08-2014, 09:08 PM
RE: Criticism on my GBC sprites? - by Quirby64 - 02-20-2014, 07:24 PM
RE: Criticism on my GBC sprites? - by Iocus - 02-21-2014, 06:05 AM
RE: Criticism on my GBC sprites? - by Quirby64 - 02-22-2014, 04:35 PM
RE: Criticism on my GBC sprites? - by Iocus - 02-23-2014, 11:58 AM
RE: Criticism on my GBC sprites? - by Quirby64 - 02-23-2014, 02:44 PM
RE: Criticism on my GBC sprites? - by Paladin - 02-23-2014, 03:33 PM
RE: Criticism on my GBC sprites? - by Iocus - 02-23-2014, 03:44 PM
RE: Criticism on my GBC sprites? - by Quirby64 - 02-23-2014, 05:30 PM
RE: Criticism on my GBC sprites? - by Quirby64 - 02-26-2014, 05:25 PM
RE: Criticism on my GBC sprites? - by Iocus - 02-27-2014, 02:11 PM
RE: Criticism on my GBC sprites? - by Vipershark - 02-27-2014, 11:02 PM
RE: Criticism on my GBC sprites? - by Quirby64 - 03-06-2014, 09:59 PM
RE: Criticism on my GBC sprites? - by Vipershark - 03-07-2014, 12:49 AM
RE: Criticism on my GBC sprites? - by Quirby64 - 03-09-2014, 04:37 PM
RE: Criticism on my GBC sprites? - by Goemar - 03-10-2014, 10:52 PM
RE: Criticism on my GBC sprites? - by Quirby64 - 03-19-2014, 04:23 PM
RE: Criticism on my GBC sprites? - by Quirby64 - 03-21-2014, 05:49 PM
RE: Criticism on my GBC sprites? - by Quirby64 - 03-23-2014, 01:44 PM
RE: Criticism on my GBC sprites? - by Quotient - 03-23-2014, 02:37 PM
RE: Criticism on my GBC sprites? - by Quirby64 - 03-24-2014, 06:46 PM
RE: Criticism on my GBC sprites? - by Mr. Jam - 03-24-2014, 07:30 PM
RE: Criticism on my GBC sprites? - by Quirby64 - 04-15-2014, 12:52 PM
RE: Criticism on my GBC sprites? - by orochii - 04-15-2014, 09:38 PM
RE: Criticism on my GBC sprites? - by Iocus - 04-16-2014, 06:27 AM
RE: Criticism on my GBC sprites? - by Quirby64 - 04-16-2014, 04:37 PM
RE: Criticism on my GBC sprites? - by Quirby64 - 05-13-2014, 06:08 PM
RE: Criticism on my GBC sprites? - by Kelvin - 05-15-2014, 05:02 PM
RE: Criticism on my GBC sprites? - by Quirby64 - 05-17-2014, 04:14 PM
RE: Criticism on my GBC sprites? - by Kelvin - 05-19-2014, 07:33 AM
RE: Criticism on my GBC sprites? - by Quirby64 - 05-19-2014, 08:29 PM
RE: Criticism on my GBC sprites? - by Iocus - 05-21-2014, 08:13 AM
RE: Criticism on my GBC sprites? - by Kelvin - 05-20-2014, 05:15 PM
RE: Criticism on my GBC sprites? - by Quirby64 - 05-20-2014, 08:36 PM
RE: Criticism on my GBC sprites? - by Kelvin - 05-21-2014, 07:55 AM
RE: Criticism on my GBC sprites? - by Quirby64 - 05-21-2014, 06:57 PM
RE: Criticism on my GBC sprites? - by Quirby64 - 05-22-2014, 09:56 PM
RE: Criticism on my GBC sprites? - by Quirby64 - 05-26-2014, 06:21 PM
RE: Criticism on my GBC sprites? - by Kelvin - 05-26-2014, 07:56 PM
RE: Criticism on my GBC sprites? - by Quirby64 - 06-12-2014, 01:48 PM
RE: Criticism on my GBC sprites? - by E-Man - 06-12-2014, 02:34 PM

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