12-24-2008, 07:03 PM
Oh... well then... there goes the laughs.
Okay, now I'll be serious. The sprites in general are pretty poorly made. First off all, the linart looks pretty boxy/flat. Luigi's nose is boxy, his hat, his torso, everything. Also... his forehead comes out too far and his mouth area doesn't come out enough. The shading is pretty poor. I'm not exactly an expert at shading myself, but I know when shading isn't very good. And the walking animation... is kinda... eh. Just basically redo the linart first, and then ask for tips on how to shade.
Okay, now I'll be serious. The sprites in general are pretty poorly made. First off all, the linart looks pretty boxy/flat. Luigi's nose is boxy, his hat, his torso, everything. Also... his forehead comes out too far and his mouth area doesn't come out enough. The shading is pretty poor. I'm not exactly an expert at shading myself, but I know when shading isn't very good. And the walking animation... is kinda... eh. Just basically redo the linart first, and then ask for tips on how to shade.