10-27-2013, 07:49 AM
Well, it's not perfect, but it is a good start. Might I suggest you do something about this guy with the gun?
![[Image: 125f420a169730d32a22e592f78a5305-d6rttrt.png]](http://fc03.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2013/298/1/2/125f420a169730d32a22e592f78a5305-d6rttrt.png)
He is pretty stiff and I think it would do you some good to curve his back a bit. Besides, ever heard of the "line of action" that any animator from the 30's and 40's know so well?
![[Image: 125f420a169730d32a22e592f78a5305-d6rttrt.png]](http://fc03.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2013/298/1/2/125f420a169730d32a22e592f78a5305-d6rttrt.png)
He is pretty stiff and I think it would do you some good to curve his back a bit. Besides, ever heard of the "line of action" that any animator from the 30's and 40's know so well?