12-19-2008, 11:30 AM
(This post was last modified: 12-19-2008, 11:32 AM by Omegakyogre.)
First evo: You still need to fix the shading (not lighting, but shading) on its head, because it looks too jagged right now. Other than that, it's great.
Second evo: Fix those things I talked about earlier and it should be fine. Don't forget to fix his jaw, because it looks really awkward right now.
Third evo: The idea is there, but the whole thing needs an improvement on the line art. Almost all of the lines need to be smoothly curved or straightened, especially since you're aiming for a Pokemon-style sprite. And, I don't know why you keep drawing legs bent inwards. I think it needs to have its legs extended out and its feet planted firmly on the ground to look right.
And, this is just a design preference, but I think it'd be better if it stayed having only the one appendage coming out the back of its head rather than two.
Second evo: Fix those things I talked about earlier and it should be fine. Don't forget to fix his jaw, because it looks really awkward right now.
Third evo: The idea is there, but the whole thing needs an improvement on the line art. Almost all of the lines need to be smoothly curved or straightened, especially since you're aiming for a Pokemon-style sprite. And, I don't know why you keep drawing legs bent inwards. I think it needs to have its legs extended out and its feet planted firmly on the ground to look right.
And, this is just a design preference, but I think it'd be better if it stayed having only the one appendage coming out the back of its head rather than two.