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These are cute!

Some colours could use stronger contrast (ash's backback green and several others, upon zooming in I noticed there are quite a few spots where you use colours so similar they're invisible on 1x resolution - you should merge them into single colours -- the red-striped guy's brighter stripes for example or Officer Jenny's hat and more). So basically, more contrast on some shades and less redundant or obsolete colours. Other than that I think you've got some solid work here. Some example animations of Ash's movement would be nice, though, so we could see if those animates well.

The Ash VS Sprite has a really straight arm, the upper arm looks too long - you should look up some references of the pose (you could even stand in front of a mirror to see get an idea of how it should look).
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GFA's Pixel Place - by GFA - 04-08-2013, 05:52 PM
RE: GFA's Pixel Place - by Previous - 04-09-2013, 12:58 AM
RE: GFA's Pixel Place - by GFA - 04-09-2013, 06:52 AM
RE: GFA's Pixel Place - by Gors - 04-09-2013, 07:36 AM
RE: GFA's Pixel Place - by Garamonde - 04-09-2013, 07:42 AM
RE: GFA's Pixel Place - by GFA - 04-10-2013, 09:47 PM
RE: GFA's Pixel Place - by Hoeloe - 04-11-2013, 03:09 AM
RE: GFA's Pixel Place - by GFA - 04-11-2013, 04:36 PM
RE: GFA's Pixel Place - by Hoeloe - 04-11-2013, 05:00 PM
RE: GFA's Pixel Place - by GFA - 04-11-2013, 05:12 PM
RE: GFA's Pixel Place - by Hoeloe - 04-11-2013, 06:03 PM
RE: GFA's Pixel Place - by GFA - 04-11-2013, 11:11 PM
RE: GFA's Pixel Place - by Garamonde - 04-11-2013, 06:20 PM
RE: GFA's Pixel Place - by Hoeloe - 04-12-2013, 03:04 AM
RE: GFA's Pixel Place - by Novally - 04-15-2013, 05:00 AM
RE: GFA's Pixel Place - by GFA - 04-28-2013, 12:48 PM
RE: GFA's Pixel Place - by SchAlternate - 04-28-2013, 01:08 PM
RE: GFA's Pixel Place - by GFA - 10-09-2013, 04:01 PM
RE: GFA's Pixel Place - by Omega - 10-09-2013, 10:53 PM
RE: GFA's Pixel Place - by GFA - 10-10-2013, 01:21 PM
RE: GFA's Pixel Place - by Neweegee - 10-10-2013, 01:29 PM

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