01-04-2013, 03:12 PM
It's looking great so far! I think the clouds at the bottom of the globe could do with the volume rendered in the other cloud clusters.
The composition feels cramped to me, because of how much space the title and Earth take up in comparison to the canvas's size, and how both elements overlap each other. Reconsidering the importance of the title in relation to its size would be a good idea.
The composition feels cramped to me, because of how much space the title and Earth take up in comparison to the canvas's size, and how both elements overlap each other. Reconsidering the importance of the title in relation to its size would be a good idea.
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![[Image: shrine.gif]](https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/344477/shrine.gif)