09-02-2012, 03:59 PM
(This post was last modified: 09-02-2012, 08:10 PM by StarSock64.)
Tarus looks like he has a huge head compared to his face. You might have to move his eyes up some and shrink the top of his head down.
e: I looked a little closer and your shading's back to being messy again...
It's especially evident on tarus's um...the part of his bangs all the way at the right, that's pretty much pillowed. Just because it's touching an outline, that doesn't mean it needs to be AA'd or to have shading there. Knock that mindset off. Clean it up.
Also, what is with these huge feet? Feet with this size and shape automatically scream Mega Man to anyone who sees it, especially with these kinds of boots, and with the armor being pieced in MM-style parts...If these aren't supposed to have anything to do with MM, don't make it look like MM. Learn from other stuff. I don't want you to be stuck on one style, it's making your art suffer.
e: I looked a little closer and your shading's back to being messy again...
It's especially evident on tarus's um...the part of his bangs all the way at the right, that's pretty much pillowed. Just because it's touching an outline, that doesn't mean it needs to be AA'd or to have shading there. Knock that mindset off. Clean it up.
Also, what is with these huge feet? Feet with this size and shape automatically scream Mega Man to anyone who sees it, especially with these kinds of boots, and with the armor being pieced in MM-style parts...If these aren't supposed to have anything to do with MM, don't make it look like MM. Learn from other stuff. I don't want you to be stuck on one style, it's making your art suffer.
![[Image: sxv5uJR.gif]](http://i.imgur.com/cqpCy.gif)