07-29-2012, 08:28 PM
i really like this! it's reminiscent of the tFR style and could probably fit in well there if it were a little larger.
i see a couple small issues though; in the first punch, it doesn't seem like he's putting much power into the punch. instead of having him pull his first back for that one frame, try having his hand go straight into the punch.
with the second punch, there's very little transition in the legs to indicate that they've moved. i recommend trying the same punch (though not the exact same, heh) yourself--preferably in front of a mirror--and examining how your legs move to leg you go into that new position.
otherwise though, it's looking pretty good!
i see a couple small issues though; in the first punch, it doesn't seem like he's putting much power into the punch. instead of having him pull his first back for that one frame, try having his hand go straight into the punch.
with the second punch, there's very little transition in the legs to indicate that they've moved. i recommend trying the same punch (though not the exact same, heh) yourself--preferably in front of a mirror--and examining how your legs move to leg you go into that new position.
otherwise though, it's looking pretty good!