10-21-2008, 07:13 PM
hmm... his mouth looks kinda wierd, outline his lips when it opens. Also you have a slighty dirty shading (almost pillowshaded). Clean it up; fish are supposed to look shiny and smooth. Also you could use less colors.
About his eyes... yeah, cartoonish and all, but make it even. Her left eye isn't a perfect circle, and doesn't look right.
About his eyes... yeah, cartoonish and all, but make it even. Her left eye isn't a perfect circle, and doesn't look right.
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