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the way you positioned the doorknob in the background makes it look like she's holding a gray something, I'd move her from there to avoid any misreadings

and this is more of a simple change but make the colored words match up with its meanings (mainly changing 'fever' to red and 'doctor' to a more neutral color) because I think it'll make much more sense this way.
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Panache Animation Thread - by thernz - 07-31-2011, 10:32 PM
RE: Panache Animation Thread - by Mag - 07-31-2011, 11:19 PM
RE: Panache Animation Thread - by Gors - 08-01-2011, 06:34 AM
RE: Panache Animation Thread - by thernz - 08-01-2011, 07:47 AM
RE: Panache Animation Thread - by Zadaben - 08-01-2011, 01:16 PM
RE: Panache Animation Thread - by thernz - 08-01-2011, 05:33 PM
RE: Panache Animation Thread - by GrimmJeel - 08-01-2011, 02:36 PM
RE: Panache Animation Thread - by thernz - 08-05-2011, 01:37 PM
RE: Panache Animation Thread - by thernz - 08-05-2011, 03:12 PM
RE: Panache Animation Thread - by Gors - 08-05-2011, 03:33 PM
RE: Panache Animation Thread - by thernz - 09-03-2011, 01:51 AM
RE: Panache Animation Thread - by Gors - 09-03-2011, 05:18 AM

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