Slash & Charmander

[brandman1996]

Eh, just a reference.
Anyways, you should make his back a bit more straight, his hat flat on top, his torso & legs longer, and more.
I say just start over.

I kind of like the stubby one. Maybe define the upper/lower parts of the limbs better (and the joints - the upper part of the arm near us is a bit too thick and the elbow is too gradually curved).

Also, don't be afraid to go wild with Slash's hair - dude's got a crazy 'do. Maybe mess up the outline a bit, make the shading lines just a bit crazier. Basically make it look less like a neat-cut wedge.

Yeah, I'd start over. Before diving right into the outline, make sure you have a good base first. Set up sort of the frame, almost a stick figure even, to help get the proportions right before moving on. Then you can build upon that, clean up extra line and all that.

Okay, what I'm getting from most of this is start over with a frame? Okay. Hold on I'll make it in a little bit.

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