Trying to get my game back

[Kino Eastriver]

Thanks for all your comments. I lightened up some of the shading, and I gotta admit, it looks a little better. I also got rid of some of the interior outlining, as Gors pointed out, especially in the shoes (which are NOT Soap! I'm not that kind of guy!) I extended the arm like Rakia suggested, but I'm not quite as sure about this one. Now the arm looks too long to me. What do you say?