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(02-20-2011, 01:50 AM)KOJJIRO Wrote: I was actually looking for criticism! I want to finish it myself ;
i'm not going to finish it for you, lol.
what i meant was i don't know enough about this to be able to give you any criticism, i was asking what your objectives were for this piece, like what did you want to do with this piece, did you have any artwork in mind when doing this, etc... so that we can give you criticism to move in that/those direction(s).
but i'll give you criticism anyway:
the colours are very saturated and i'm having difficulties reading where the light is coming from. batman's head seems rather large for his body ard i can't tell whether the things at the bottom of his cape are tentacles, ripped cape or swirls.
more definition please! Big Grin
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BATMAN (WIP) - by SKELTON S. SKELETON - 02-17-2011, 09:58 PM
RE: BATMAN (WIP) - by Chris2Balls [:B] - 02-19-2011, 07:10 PM
RE: BATMAN (WIP) - by SKELTON S. SKELETON - 02-20-2011, 01:50 AM
RE: BATMAN (WIP) - by thernz - 02-20-2011, 02:04 AM
RE: BATMAN (WIP) - by Dazz - 02-20-2011, 02:50 AM
RE: BATMAN (WIP) - by Chris2Balls [:B] - 02-20-2011, 10:39 AM
RE: BATMAN (WIP) - by SKELTON S. SKELETON - 03-11-2011, 05:30 PM

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