09-24-2010, 08:52 PM
You're heading into the right direction style wise but the pokemon themsevles are terrible, they dont capture the personality of the pokemon at all, Victini's body is too big and it's head is too small and you forgot it's backwings.
gear is just too small in general, and you can use better colors.
denchura pre-evo is just weird, why is it standing? use spinirak as a reference for him, he should be that size
mamanbo has nice lineart, but the eye placement is off and the orangish color you used doesnt work well with the sprite, same goes for the denchura pre-evo, should be yellow and purple, not yellow and green, the pokemon itself is only 2 colors. Victini's colors are perfect.
overall just make the first 3 BIGGER.
gear is just too small in general, and you can use better colors.
denchura pre-evo is just weird, why is it standing? use spinirak as a reference for him, he should be that size
mamanbo has nice lineart, but the eye placement is off and the orangish color you used doesnt work well with the sprite, same goes for the denchura pre-evo, should be yellow and purple, not yellow and green, the pokemon itself is only 2 colors. Victini's colors are perfect.
overall just make the first 3 BIGGER.