[art][wip] Beauty queen etna v20000 (crits plz)

[Ashura]

thanks

I'm still not sure how to shade her bunches. I was considering shading them like this

http://img84.imageshack.us/img84/2581/af...511919.png

then like this

http://www.gamefaqs.com/ps3/960091-trini..._screen-81

or like this

http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=6377

but I'm still undecided so I left it mostly unshaded for now. I think a little more contrast would go a long way

EDIT: HERE'S YOUR PIZZA



still unsatisfied with the hair...