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[isael-21]

Let me reply one by one.

help I'm Ash the bottom half of my arms got cut off in a pokemon accident and due to that I'm incredibly stiff

Mmm, like I said before, you can say all you want, doesn't matter =) (but still didn't understand )

Be more specific. Moneyman.
All of his limbs are too short/small. Check some anatomy or art from the show. You also can't tell that his arms have any elbows. He looks like a cardboard cutout instead of an actual person.

- If I make it bigger then it won't be the way I'm thinking, I just want to make a regular sprite.
- I don't know anything about that "Anatomy" you're talking about :?
- Yeah, I missed the Elbows, but I really don't know how to make 'em. I might try to do something.

the sprite is also mirrored.
While this isn't a /huge/ problem, most people aren't 100% symmetrical.

I thought it'd be better that way

Y'know, it isn't really that bad for a first sprite.
But it's still pretty bad.
The main thing you need to work on is the anatomy.

Again the Anatomy, I really don't know about that =S

also the inside outlines shouldn't be black as they 'eat' the space available in the sprite area

I want to improve some things and then I might change some Black Outlines.

It also looks like you've liberally used the Line tool in paint. I'm not saying that you SHOULDN'T use tools, what you should aim for is to make it look like you DIDN'T use them, if that makes sense.

That's right, gotta apply it pixel art things, but first gotta learn x)