They're all pretty good sketches
BUT
the scott pilgrim fight pic stood out as borderline-offensive, construction wise. It's not bad, but it can be even more dramatic with a few pose changes
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Their lines of actions do not fit. As a result, their clash doesn't look as tense as you probably intended it to be. An interesting man-vs-man fight picture has one character's line of action heading towards the other character's line of action. If you make their lines of actions fit, then their fist fight will look more intense than how it looks now.
http://2.bp.blogspot.com/__SvNIKK8Zpk/Sx...07-big.jpg
You should take a look at this. I'm sure that it'll help accentuate the poses of your heavily stylized cartoons.
lol get used to it, it's a very useful tool
BUT
the scott pilgrim fight pic stood out as borderline-offensive, construction wise. It's not bad, but it can be even more dramatic with a few pose changes
Their lines of actions do not fit. As a result, their clash doesn't look as tense as you probably intended it to be. An interesting man-vs-man fight picture has one character's line of action heading towards the other character's line of action. If you make their lines of actions fit, then their fist fight will look more intense than how it looks now.
http://2.bp.blogspot.com/__SvNIKK8Zpk/Sx...07-big.jpg
You should take a look at this. I'm sure that it'll help accentuate the poses of your heavily stylized cartoons.
Quote:I do not like posemaiacs
lol get used to it, it's a very useful tool