Shen Gong Wu

[Dave]

So basically your telling us that you used to get paid to work for a video game? Then how come the pallete just...has nothing regarless to the shading, structure, and the line art at all? the line art could be a bit bigger, and there has to be shading for it to have depth, wich is a main problem you happen to have, also, the colors just dont work, try something a bit brighter, and as in for depth, there should be darker, and if this wont work for you, then go look for some tutorials, cuz there is not point on showing us your work, and try to make us change our minds on our opinions.