01-02-2010, 07:40 PM
A lot needs worked on, and requesting a lock? Dumb idea.
First off, I'm pretty sure that shit style you chose to sprite in has GREY AA always, but IDK. The fire bits have too much contrast from yellow to orange or too terrible shaping. The eyes look like they were elongated and should be smoothed out more. Use the darker blue of his pupils to use less black around the eyes. The chin, nose, and petal things create three different perspectives compared to the body and makes the whole thing look ugly.
First off, I'm pretty sure that shit style you chose to sprite in has GREY AA always, but IDK. The fire bits have too much contrast from yellow to orange or too terrible shaping. The eyes look like they were elongated and should be smoothed out more. Use the darker blue of his pupils to use less black around the eyes. The chin, nose, and petal things create three different perspectives compared to the body and makes the whole thing look ugly.