12-10-2009, 10:27 PM
(This post was last modified: 12-10-2009, 11:03 PM by TomGuycott.)
The outlines are rather thick (which could be considered a style choice), but also they make him look square in certain sections, they'd need to be rounded out. Also, his feet look too big.
The mouth could also use some work, but I'm not entirely sure why it's bothering me...
Also, it looks like you use an actual sprite of kirby as a circular base, did your own shading over it, created new hands and feet and then made that enormous outline over it. Granted, it's not that difficult to make a circular base for Kirby, but still, the size is comparable to some existing Kirby sprites.
The mouth could also use some work, but I'm not entirely sure why it's bothering me...
Also, it looks like you use an actual sprite of kirby as a circular base, did your own shading over it, created new hands and feet and then made that enormous outline over it. Granted, it's not that difficult to make a circular base for Kirby, but still, the size is comparable to some existing Kirby sprites.