07-16-2008, 08:24 PM
I think it could use more definition in the lineart for something thats supposed to look really anorexic.
Also, I dont like the lines on the arms, they look, well, like lines :/, not lack of muscle definition, nor skin definition, just, lines.
The legs look too jagged, and out of proportion, try to round them off.
Also, I dont like the lines on the arms, they look, well, like lines :/, not lack of muscle definition, nor skin definition, just, lines.
The legs look too jagged, and out of proportion, try to round them off.