08-11-2009, 06:23 PM
(08-11-2009, 05:08 PM)$uperLugia95 Wrote: You are good at shading and many of the basic stufff except you have a few errors. Try making a longer chin, and make his legs fatter. Also in the left hand remove the Machoke's scars, since he has them on the top of the arm and not the bottom. From the waist down it looks weird since his legs seem to look like he's standing forward and not like he's twisting so fix that somehow or make his legs face a little bit to the right. Try to fix his left arm area, and try to make Machoke his own way other then have him have every detail of the sprite. Nice sprite and good luck!!
okay, so:
1. for the scars, he has all around his arm, look:
http://www.pokebip.com/pokemon/pokedex/i...ori/67.png http://guidesarchive.ign.com/guides/1204...achoke.gif
2. hmm... for the belt I don't know, cause if you look at masked muscle, he's twisting his body... I could try anyway...
3. For the chin, I will make it longer...
4. Legs fatter... I don't know... Could try
Thank you dude, it's that kind of comment i like ('cause i had another version of it and the first comment i recieved was: hahaha! the face made me laugh! it's the worst sprite i've ever seen...)