06-23-2009, 08:15 AM
For both MP2 and Super Metroid the ship is the same. Trust me, i had both games.
Now for critique:
You SERIOUSLY need to work on your shading! You use WAY too much gradients and you don't take much account of the 3D shapes either.
You need to improve the outline. They are way too thin and does not blend in with the shadows very well.
For the windsheild; THE SHIP IS STREAMLINED! It has depth, so the windsheild wouldn't be exactly as wide the whole way.
Try Hue Shifting the colors of the ship. It looks pretty much boring with that dark-yellow colour.
Now for critique:
You SERIOUSLY need to work on your shading! You use WAY too much gradients and you don't take much account of the 3D shapes either.
You need to improve the outline. They are way too thin and does not blend in with the shadows very well.
For the windsheild; THE SHIP IS STREAMLINED! It has depth, so the windsheild wouldn't be exactly as wide the whole way.
Try Hue Shifting the colors of the ship. It looks pretty much boring with that dark-yellow colour.