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I like it a lot! It'd be really cool if you made it into a full spritesheet.
But in the run animation, you should have Finn's back/left arm move farther forward, since right now it doesn't match the way his front/right arm moves. It's very noticeable in this frame, which also has another problem:
I don't think his body needs to move forward right here, so you should push it back to where it is in the rest of the animation(one pixel back).
After that, you should get rid of a few lighting inconsistencies on Finn's legs and hat.
I think it should look like this(not this slow, of course)
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robotnik finger fix...
and here is this i did for fun...
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Here is a piece I am working on as a weekly challenge for Pixel Joint. The challenge is to create humanoid or animal personification using the sun, moon, or earth. I chose the moon...
More progress...
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i sprited fry as if he were a cameo in the old Simpsons arcade game.
looks accurate! would other futurama characters be a possibility?
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Thank you! I was actually going to work on Bender and Leela, but i never got around to it because i was working on other stuff. However, since it looks pretty accurate ill start them tomorrow.
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doodles of death and bats
And more sonic progression started on knuckles...
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Likin' that knuckles. The color is the most appealing part to me.. nice job.
now do the real knuckles
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not joking though, i prefer the new knuckles' design over the original - because it only makes sense to make the brawns of the group have... brawny arms
though... I don't know why people flip their shit when Sonic's arm became blue in Boom. They argue that skin colored arms contrast well against his body, but... Knuckles' arm is red over a red body. I don't see any logic
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08-20-2015, 01:59 PM
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not joking though, i prefer the new knuckles' design over the original - because it only makes sense to make the brawns of the group have... brawny arms
though... I don't know why people flip their shit when Sonic's arm became blue in Boom. They argue that skin colored arms contrast well against his body, but... Knuckles' arm is red over a red body. I don't see any logic
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They're just looking for excuses to pepper spray gamestop employees d: For real feedback though, something feels off about the 'rolled up' shine. Like it is a bit too over done for what it is meant to be. might be just me though.
(08-20-2015, 11:06 AM)Gors Wrote: not joking though, i prefer the new knuckles' design over the original - because it only makes sense to make the brawns of the group have... brawny arms
its cool, but i wish they gave him his personality from sonic x (gullible & hot-headed, possibly friendly with animals) instead of making him the dumb, funny guy.
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Well I guess we are in the era where kids think that they have the right to dictate other peoples' actions to protect their extremely wimpy feelings because they can't tell the difference between petty non-issues and things that actually deserve scorn
08-24-2015, 01:52 PM
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(08-23-2015, 08:29 PM)SmashWaffle Wrote: (07-21-2015, 02:34 PM)JOE_HILL Wrote: Ok, i see what you mean about them being the same. I just wanted to test out some things i have learned by improving them... and yes i do have others.
Here is a God Of War piece i did.
That pac-man one offends me...
1. Why?
2. So?
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sorry to offend you , but Pac-Man had to die eventually... haha
In other news...Here is a smash Demake i created. Its mostly editing and the use of other people's sprites( like the mario and donkey kong, the megaman and ryu, galaga, and the smash icons). I basically just edited them and made them more clean with some AA. The only things that are truly mine(just to clarify) are the DK arm swing, the dust, the pokeball, mario's cape, the player numbers , and the percent sign. Overall, i really enjoyed making this. I would like to make a few more...
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