He seems too wide, with the side pose as a reference, I don't think he'd be that fat from the front. Maybe it's just me though...
Edit: Here's an quick example
![[Image: ibgsoapeNcPASD.png]](/image.php?src=http%3A%2F%2Fi.minus.com%2FibgsoapeNcPASD.png&hash=7ac5eeed1e46c22d06b604d9f249335a)
Made him less wide and made a slight curve at his waste to give him some egg looking proportion.
Edit: Here's an quick example
![[Image: ibgsoapeNcPASD.png]](/image.php?src=http%3A%2F%2Fi.minus.com%2FibgsoapeNcPASD.png&hash=7ac5eeed1e46c22d06b604d9f249335a)
Made him less wide and made a slight curve at his waste to give him some egg looking proportion.