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RE: The key to success is Practice (Drawings)Now with Requests!! - GrooveMan.exe - 09-19-2009
Beagal's version is a lot less creepy-looking and a lot more 't-shirt design'-like.
I'd reccomend going for a similar line-drawing look. And ditch the oversized, staring eyes you're using. *shudder*
RE: The key to success is Practice (Drawings)Now with Requests!! - Mabelma - 09-20-2009
Yeah I actually like it. I'll try it out.
Better?
![[Image: SmallClouds3.png]](/image.php?src=http%3A%2F%2Fi451.photobucket.com%2Falbums%2Fqq234%2Fmabelma95%2FSmallClouds3.png&hash=1f0e901206d69fa704d199426b32288e)
RE: The key to success is Practice (Drawings)Now with Requests!! - Baegal - 09-20-2009
the eyes dont match with the bird. I think the notes should go down more two. Maybe also if he doesnt look right at you, too.
RE: The key to success is Practice (Drawings)Now with Requests!! - Mabelma - 09-20-2009
Oh ok. I'll try it out. I don't how to really make the eyes look good. I think the other eyes look better but the could be a little smaller.
*edit*
Better?
![[Image: SmallClouds4.png]](/image.php?src=http%3A%2F%2Fi451.photobucket.com%2Falbums%2Fqq234%2Fmabelma95%2FSmallClouds4.png&hash=bad00827427954d7adfda095c0f67f09)
I don't know why the eyes look so creepy
RE: The key to success is Practice (Drawings)Now with Requests!! - Baegal - 09-20-2009
try making him face more like this
![[Image: burdd.png]](/image.php?src=http%3A%2F%2Fi586.photobucket.com%2Falbums%2Fss301%2FBaegal%2Fburdd.png&hash=91236ac0ea2834f70402a7552b794ff3)
Obviously with more effort, but this is just an idea. I was too lazy to add the music
RE: The key to success is Practice (Drawings)Now with Requests!! - Mabelma - 09-20-2009
Oh ok. is the music ok now?
RE: The key to success is Practice (Drawings)Now with Requests!! - Baegal - 09-20-2009
looks okay to me.
RE: The key to success is Practice (Drawings)Now with Requests!! - Mabelma - 09-20-2009
Awesome here's the latest version:
![[Image: SmallClouds5.png]](/image.php?src=http%3A%2F%2Fi451.photobucket.com%2Falbums%2Fqq234%2Fmabelma95%2FSmallClouds5.png&hash=1bdaac7dd7f92b1fc86d369c356a5c54)
Tried doing what you told me.
*edit*
Worked a little more on the shading of the clouds cause I liked how Baegel's clouds looked.
![[Image: SmallClouds6.png]](/image.php?src=http%3A%2F%2Fi451.photobucket.com%2Falbums%2Fqq234%2Fmabelma95%2FSmallClouds6.png&hash=116472a582f6ae7034d88cb11c0dad5e)
Hope you like!
RE: The key to success is Practice (Drawings)Now with Requests!! - Baegal - 09-20-2009
seems like the beak could be smaller to me, and the bird could be more circular, but it does look better to me
RE: The key to success is Practice (Drawings)Now with Requests!! - Mabelma - 09-20-2009
Oh ok awesome. I'll try and do that.
Better?
![[Image: SmallClouds7.png]](/image.php?src=http%3A%2F%2Fi451.photobucket.com%2Falbums%2Fqq234%2Fmabelma95%2FSmallClouds7.png&hash=b7458f20975c3e8a456ae5ba385a2867)
RE: The key to success is Practice (Drawings)Now with Requests!! - GrooveMan.exe - 09-20-2009
Yes, actually. That looks much better.
RE: The key to success is Practice (Drawings)Now with Requests!! - Mabelma - 09-20-2009
Any ideas on how to improve it?
RE: The key to success is Practice (Drawings)Now with Requests!! - Baegal - 09-20-2009
I like that one much more. Try rounding out the eyes, since everything else is rounded, and making them shorter
RE: The key to success is Practice (Drawings)Now with Requests!! - Mabelma - 09-20-2009
Oh ok. That's awesome. I'll do it later.
Done?
![[Image: SmallClouds3-1.png]](/image.php?src=http%3A%2F%2Fi451.photobucket.com%2Falbums%2Fqq234%2Fmabelma95%2FSmallClouds3-1.png&hash=07ed54eb5fb6fb8ba9a4f03742546edc)
I hope you like it. Is it finished? Anything I should add?
RE: The key to success is Practice (Drawings)Now with Requests!! - Mabelma - 09-21-2009
Is it done?