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The Legend Of Luigi - Perigi - 08-13-2008
The Legend Of Luigi, my comic series, I wasn't sure I should post but here It is, also, don't expect any fancy effects, but If you know a program which can give me some, PM me, thnx, Anyway,
Comic #1 The Legend Begins
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RE: The Legend Of Luigi - Zee - 08-13-2008
Colored Textboxes, broken forth wall, self-insert, and that poor attempt at humor in the first two panels failed. You've got AA going against the black background, the character is a poor attempt at editing, and your title panel is very close to illegible. Also, mixing sprite styles is bad.
RE: The Legend Of Luigi - Perigi - 08-13-2008
Zee, you can lock, or close, or something to this thread, I'm gonna quit my comic series...
So you can close the thread.
RE: The Legend Of Luigi - Rakia - 08-13-2008
Shortest.
Comic career.
Ever.
RE: The Legend Of Luigi - Perigi - 08-13-2008
(08-13-2008, 05:10 PM)Rakia Wrote: Shortest.
Comic career.
Ever.
I was gonna continue but I decided that what I had so far for the story was pretty bad, so I quit
RE: The Legend Of Luigi - Goemar - 08-13-2008
Wow quitting... that gets you far.
You know you could always try again? Take into account what others have said and improve your work.
RE: The Legend Of Luigi - Flare - 08-13-2008
I like the who cares about that bit, but I would rather have it cut into a story instead of you.
RE: The Legend Of Luigi - Alpha Six - 08-14-2008
you know, it really isn't that bad. it's just a damn intro comic. it's not super sloppy or anything like the rest of the shit thrown this way.
i'd say go for another issue and then get crits on that.
RE: The Legend Of Luigi - Kairos - 08-14-2008
(08-13-2008, 05:10 PM)Rakia Wrote: Shortest.
Comic career.
Ever.
You've never seen any of the comic on Sprites Inc, have you?
RE: The Legend Of Luigi - Manaphy94 - 08-14-2008
You should continue, quitting gets you no where.
RE: The Legend Of Luigi - Perigi - 08-14-2008
(08-14-2008, 01:00 PM)Manaphy94 Wrote: You should continue, quitting gets you no where.
Because All of you are comenting on this, then I'll continue, and I had done part 2 already so here it is, CC please and enjoy till part 3 (Part 2 doesn't have anything THAT important...)
Comic #2 LaLoser
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RE: The Legend Of Luigi - Raytheon - 08-16-2008
went downhill
RE: The Legend Of Luigi - Perigi - 08-17-2008
Someone is now going to be helping me with my comics his name is J-bit, so yeah, he'll be helping me now
RE: The Legend Of Luigi - J-bit - 08-18-2008
Hi everyone! So I'm gonna help Perigi with this comic. I'll try to get you guys to like the comic with comedy and epic story lines. Enjoy!