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Moai statue (wip) - Toad - 01-18-2010
![[Image: ehv0z.png]](/image.php?src=http%3A%2F%2Fi50.tinypic.com%2Fehv0z.png&hash=a4d37e7b2459d14c94ceceb51108a32a)
Any crits before I continue?
RE: Moai statue (wip) - Marth - 01-18-2010
study facial anatomy, I know it's moai, but your facial anatomy is quite boned up.
RE: Moai statue (wip) - Cobalt Blue - 01-18-2010
nowhere near being a moai.
RE: Moai statue (wip) - Chdonga - 01-18-2010
Its mouth and nose is too low, its jaw should be higher.
RE: Moai statue (wip) - FRET - 01-18-2010
hello dr manhatten
RE: Moai statue (wip) - Koopaul - 01-18-2010
Aw I love Moais and that's not a Moai.
Get rid of the ears, nostrils, make the lips big and flat.
RE: Moai statue (wip) - Jovian-12 - 01-18-2010
needs to be a lot more angular, I think. looks too much like a plain old human face with exaggerated features, instead of a blocky carved stone that looks humorously like a face.
RE: Moai statue (wip) - Toad - 01-18-2010
Its not supposed to look perfectly like a Moai statue and it's not supposed to look perfectly like a face.
![[Image: 10xzdzb.png]](/image.php?src=http%3A%2F%2Fi46.tinypic.com%2F10xzdzb.png&hash=5f109f487162b46dcf4606a39dd33f80)
edit: And don't say it doesn't look like either one at all.
RE: Moai statue (wip) - Ngamer01 - 01-18-2010
Sorry, but do you want C&C on this? Sounds like you don't want C&C on this with the last post.
I mean I can understand if you're looking to do a stylized take on the Maoi statue, but you shouldn't shut the door on all the comments. Right now to me, it looks like you're doing a Silver Surfer mugshot instead of a Maoi statue. No offense.
RE: Moai statue (wip) - Toad - 01-18-2010
I'm just trying to learn how to shade correctly. I should have been more specific.
RE: Moai statue (wip) - Vipershark - 01-18-2010
why is the mouth a thin line while everything else is large and vague? it clashes.
RE: Moai statue (wip) - Sengir - 01-18-2010
Smooth out the lines
RE: Moai statue (wip) - Cobalt Blue - 01-19-2010
(01-18-2010, 09:39 PM)Toad Wrote: I'm just trying to learn how to shade correctly. I should have been more specific.work on a simple, basic or normal shape , learn how the light affects it, study different lightsources on said object.
then you're free to explore more stylized approaches. right now the whole thing is a mass of excuses and shades.
RE: Moai statue (wip) - Toad - 01-19-2010
(01-19-2010, 01:56 AM)Metaru Wrote:(01-18-2010, 09:39 PM)Toad Wrote: I'm just trying to learn how to shade correctly. I should have been more specific.work on a simple, basic or normal shape , learn how the light affects it, study different lightsources on said object.
then you're free to explore more stylized approaches. right now the whole thing is a mass of excuses and shades.
Alright.
RE: Moai statue (wip) - Maneko - 01-19-2010
Moais are larger and much more angular as well.