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RE: My Karts - Stooben - 11-22-2009
Nice job on the rims. The bubble window could be just a little rounder, though. Maybe by a pixel or two. Nothing too drastic.
RE: My Karts - zwb147 - 11-22-2009
![[Image: BananaShip-6.png]](/image.php?src=http%3A%2F%2Fi570.photobucket.com%2Falbums%2Fss145%2Fzwb147%2FBananaShip-6.png&hash=4a25884b57efd6bf2a00c7e6420665c2)
Thanks! Newest version with rounder window.(Its also taller.)
RE: My Karts - Stooben - 11-23-2009
Try adding an additional pixel of shading to each line of shading on the window.
RE: My Karts - zwb147 - 11-23-2009
![[Image: BananaShip-7.png]](/image.php?src=http%3A%2F%2Fi570.photobucket.com%2Falbums%2Fss145%2Fzwb147%2FBananaShip-7.png&hash=8f38f85d0c66acee0318cafb9999a7ee)
Done. I think.
RE: My Karts - Stooben - 11-23-2009
Looks good to me.
RE: My Karts - zwb147 - 11-23-2009
Great! Now, which one to work on?
RE: My Karts - Rhyme - 11-23-2009
imo you should do the yoshi egg one next.. here's what i think of it:
it looks nothing like an egg shell, it's way to perfectly rounded, make it somewhat jagged on the edge. the tires are abit small. And it looks like there's no shading on there, but that might or might not be my pc.
RE: My Karts - Stooben - 11-23-2009
Yeah, the Yoshi Egg kart would probably be pretty easy to tackle. See what you can make of it, and we'll go from there.
RE: My Karts - zwb147 - 11-23-2009
![[Image: Egg1.png]](/image.php?src=http%3A%2F%2Fi570.photobucket.com%2Falbums%2Fss145%2Fzwb147%2FEgg1.png&hash=4cff79367ed717b06d1ddcc0c784c8d3)
I tried to make it a bit more jagged, And this is how it turned out. What should be done. At least it isn't perfectly round anymore.
By the way, its the Egg 1.
RE: My Karts - Rhyme - 11-23-2009
Looks a lot better being bigger and less perfect round. I think you should make the inside of the wheels orange and the orange lining on the seat-area of the car like the pic you pasted in. And a bit more contrast in the greens, maybe. Good job, though.
RE: My Karts - Stooben - 11-23-2009
The egg kart from MKDS was a pretty small kart; try making it a little less wide.
And as Rhymey said, the seat needs to be created and the wheels need orange hubcaps.
RE: My Karts - zwb147 - 11-23-2009
![[Image: Egg1-2.png]](/image.php?src=http%3A%2F%2Fi570.photobucket.com%2Falbums%2Fss145%2Fzwb147%2FEgg1-2.png&hash=7e62711e3ed0f79253693dd39cb386d8)
Added Orange seat cover and Wheels and More Contrast in the green.
EDIT: Made it less wide.
RE: My Karts - Stooben - 11-23-2009
I think if it were about 2-3 pixels less wide, it would look good.
RE: My Karts - Rhyme - 11-23-2009
Looks good.
do you know what hue shifting is? you need to do it more. The dark orange is kind of bleh imo, try to hueshift it to a brighter yet darker orange (go to custom colors and mess with hue.. Till you get a difference that's noticable but not too drastic)
RE: My Karts - zwb147 - 11-23-2009
![[Image: Egg1-4.png]](/image.php?src=http%3A%2F%2Fi570.photobucket.com%2Falbums%2Fss145%2Fzwb147%2FEgg1-4.png&hash=2a0c333fb7976951861bfb2ae4a9e62c)
How's This, the wheels look a bit close together, I can change that if needed
Edit, changed the orange.