In short: Everything.
Long version: Shading is really bad, look at jeans - they don't look like that... Shading is so bad it makes the line art quite hard to see - I just don't like it.

I tried fixing some more things from M. Jeans tell me what to fix.
Some of the highlights are clorox marks like the ones at the middle of the sprite.

The outline is a big jaggy and they look like something from the 70s - don't know if that's your intent.

Yeah that's what I wanted it too look like. Is the shading good?

The creases look highly odd, I would look at them a lot closer. Use anime as a reference, and see how the clothes crease etc.
Some nasty person also jizzed on them.

Thanks but what is jizzed and what is creases?

Creases - none straight bits, you know, folds in the fabric etc.
Jizz is stuff that comes out of males when they are happy - google it.

Oh that's what you mean. LOL. I'll fix it. What's wrong with teh folds?

To get folds like that someone would have to carefully do them by hands, they don't look natural.

(03-23-2009, 04:00 PM)Mabelma Wrote: Oh that's what you mean. LOL. I'll fix it. What's wrong with teh folds?

Whats wrong is that teh isn't a word, they need to be renamed the folds. They look way to jagged.

How can I make them look more natural Goemar? You know what I meant Paris.

Look at real jeans. Simple.

OK I'll do that for tomorrow.I'm learning to 3d model.

Ok so Goemar I just put on a pair of jeans and noticed the folds. I'll make it look like that. I can't do anything right. Sorry. I'll post two things tomorrow.

Here's are the new things:


C+C please!