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Gors, your music never ceizes to amaze me. I strife to be at least as good of a composer, but I do improve.

I guess Chris' weakness is a 3rd ball, because he can only juggle 2.
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Balls of steel?
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Yup. I'm a Touhou fan.
Those are Wheatleys, aren't they?
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If Chris doesn't do an Eggman-style level 1 boss thing, where he just dangles the balls from chains and swings them back and forth, I will be disappointed.
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(09-17-2012, 09:13 PM)Rosencrantz Wrote: ...where he just dangles the balls

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Yup. I'm a Touhou fan.
Hey Gors I hope it's ok if I added one character without asking first..
laughed at 'zabaden'
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By the way, Ploaj, since you're already displaying the character name in the speech bubble, you could get rid of the arrow pointing it. Or, remove the character name. Having both of them is redundant.

I didn't answer it so yes, I'm fine with Zadaben being in the game. I had a good laugh from it, heh

btw the floor tiles aren't connected.
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I like having both name and arror, but I'd make the arrow much smaller.
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There's an arrow...? Blank
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(09-26-2012, 11:22 AM)Mighty Jetters Wrote: There's an arrow...? Blank
The tail of the speech bubble could be considered an arrow of sorts, it points to who is talking. But uh, yeah, I'd say make the tail shorter, whether you remove the character name or not. Also... I dunno if this goes against the aesthetic you're going for but I think the bubble itself could stand to be a bit more round, maybe lined with a tan color rather than blue? It'd look warmer and a bit more comic-like and friendly, seeing as most people will be café guests. Maybe have a different bubble for Vipershark and his assorted underlings.
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Ohh... derp. Yeah I'd prob. make it a bit shorter. I like having it and the name there though.
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Is this better?
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Well if it's shorter than it should probably be thinner, too..?
and less jagggy with out 2Dope2-3 patterns, just keep it at 2-2-2 or maybe even 1-1-1 :>
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