Looks better to me.

(02-25-2010, 04:45 PM)Video_Pochi Wrote: lugia still bugs me
look his head size

Notice that the feathers are actually open on that one as well.

Ya that works. Maybe that's why I was unsure about the head the first time.

(02-25-2010, 10:03 PM)Tonberry2k Wrote: quote
Notice that the feathers are actually open on that one as well.

Which is why I didn't make the head too much smaller

I'm almost done Fixing Lugia, he'll be Posted Soon

Maybe you can make alternate "hands" with spread fingers too?

Finished:



@ Ton: Maybe, he doesn't really need it though...Except the Idle's first few 'Close' Wings, since they kind of look like They're attached to each other

Looks alot better

Good job!

I may be taking a break after I finish Charizard and Goldeen, Mostly because the work from my classes is starting to pile up, and I don't have too much time to concentrate on one thing...(I guess this is why I didn't make any sheets last March either...)

I'll still try to get at least one sheet in a week, or at least start one, but for now, I need to focus more on my classes...

hey man.. good job, your lugia its pretty good

The lugia's expression makes him look grumpy and old lol, but great sprites

not grumpy, more likely to cast a beam attack

right?

Well, That's the expression Lugia has not only in the Artwork, but in his HG/SS Sprites...I think they just tried to make him look more 'fierce' with the 'Angry Eyebrow'

Anyway, i finished remaking Charizard:



I have to say, for the most part, I'm very happy with this sheet

I think Charizard's neck is a bit too long. I'd shorten it a bit. Plus, I don't think his neck should be that straight when he flies.

When his neck is going up... idk, something about the shading seems off. It looks more like he has a dark orange neck warmer on than shading.