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Okay I didn't really go in depth in my story so Thres this kid Max Green, you know joe average. He's walking to school and he sees giant planes fly by, he thinks thats pretty weird and keeps walking. The next day he sees more. Max thinks to himself, damn is there a military project going on. When he gets to his house he plops down on his couch and turns on the tv. He watches tons of footage of the mysterious planes on a news channel. The reporter is standing on a street corner pointing at the top of a huge building, where about 10-15 of those planes hovering over the city. Max alomost choked. They were hovering! He knew it wasnt the military. He called up his friend Alicia on his cell. Alicia has been max's friend for years, they went to grade school and middle school together. "Alicia, where are you? Are you looking at the news.?" Max asked. "Max I'm at my dads office were about to leave call me when I get home." "Wait youre dowtown? Look up at the 104 building! Quick" "Aright Max whats so important? If youre trying to show me another poster for underwear I'm gonna--" She paused. "You see em huh?" max asked. "Max the 104 building' on fire!" she shrieked. "what?" max looked back at the news the reporter was running away covered in soot. "Max?! Max!? What the hell?why was that building on fire!?" Max could tell she was talking while running. "Listen there were these planes, like UFOs! You gotta leave!" what was this a terrorist attack? Max thought to himself.
Okay thats as much as i got so far, this kinda leads up to the big war. Sorry I wasnt very clear!
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my comic - by Zoo Monkey - 09-02-2009, 03:02 PM
RE: my comic - by kyrtuck - 09-02-2009, 05:11 PM
RE: my comic - by Zoo Monkey - 09-07-2009, 05:24 PM
RE: my comic - by Maxpphire - 09-02-2009, 09:02 PM
RE: my comic - by Alpha Six - 09-02-2009, 09:43 PM
RE: my comic - by GrooveMan.exe - 09-07-2009, 05:27 PM
RE: my comic - by Nick - 09-08-2009, 09:00 PM
RE: my comic - by [robo9] - 09-08-2009, 09:06 PM
RE: my comic - by kyrtuck - 09-10-2009, 05:18 PM
RE: my comic - by Zoo Monkey - 09-13-2009, 04:04 PM

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