Madden NFL

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I'm working on a series of sprites based off of NFL greats, which I hope to eventually animate and compile into a Madden sheet.
First one is first~
anyone know who this is




also ignore the shading because i need to overhaul that with more contrast
lineart more so

[LilGrim1991]

Maaaartttyyyyy, >.<

It has been awhile, hasn't it?

-The front hand is kinda small compared to the arm
-the helmet's shapes is kinda weird(compared to the white stripe)
-the foot closes to us, its really irregularly shaped
-Also, try hue-shifting a bit in your shades.

That's all I'll say for now. But hey, you gotta start somewhere,right?

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ff yeah i really lost all my skill after taking such a longass break
i will defend myself by noting that the hand isnt small, its just the angle his 4 fingers are on the ball
also yeah the feet are fucked up; as is the helmet
the hue shifting is something i thought about; but given the basic kind of thing im trying to pull off here i decided it was for the better to leave it out

[CeeY]

Favre is skinnier than that.

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motherfucking bump
tried to take some criticism, i'm pretty sure i fixed this shit up pretty well


all i have left to do is the facemask

[LilGrim1991]

nice, Marty. I see your picking this up again rather fast.

[Chdonga]

It's good, I don't really like the feet, I think they look weird but it looks good.

[LilGrim1991]

I don't mind the feet, it seems intentional, but maybe having it angled more toward us would be a nice alteration.

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anyone have any idea who that defensive tackle is also c+c dawg