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(11-19-2008, 10:51 PM)koopaul Wrote: What? This project's not dead? No, I'm just an amazing procrastinator.

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Tell me what you think so far. Monty Mole is always a bothersome being, I feel I still don't have him right.
Monty Mole is MUCH better than the old one Smile
I think it's perfect

Goomba eyes are a bit weird IMO
maybe make the eyebrows black?
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#32
The new Goomba and Paragoomba are much better! And monty mole is better too.
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#33
The propeller bothers me...

I like the new Monty, though Smile
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#34
Yes, propeller looks too small. Compare with this sheet.
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#35
I'd say that for paragooma and paratroopa you should put the wing over top of the normal icon or something like that. If there was only one para creature the wing would be a good icon but it seems weird this way. 'cause like paragooma is a lot more like goomba than it is paratroopa, but its icon is the same as paratroopa's.
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#36
These are awesome! But, what are you making them for?
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#37
(11-22-2008, 02:09 AM)Miles07 Wrote: Yes, propeller looks too small. Compare with this sheet.

The propeller is very big in m&lPiT, but it is smaller in YIDS, look http://www.spriters-resource.com/nintend...hyguys.png

Anyway, I agree, the propeller should be bigger.
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(11-22-2008, 02:32 AM)Arthur Wrote: I'd say that for paragooma and paratroopa you should put the wing over top of the normal icon or something like that. If there was only one para creature the wing would be a good icon but it seems weird this way. 'cause like paragooma is a lot more like goomba than it is paratroopa, but its icon is the same as paratroopa's.

The borders for the icon are different: One's brown, one's red. But yeah, other winged-enemies that may use the same icon could get confused with these (if we only see the icons), so better / more unique icons could be a good idea.
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#39
Alright, I grabbed two frames of the Fly Guy from Brawl- the second one looks about the size of what you made.

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#40
Okay I've started again. The first post is updated.

If your wondering, Paratroopa's icon is official. I took it from his Mario Power Tennis emblem seen on his racket.

I don't know what Paragoomba is but because Paratroopa has the same bat in the Baseball games I would assume they'd have the same emblem.

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(11-22-2008, 01:46 PM)Miles07 Wrote: The borders for the icon are different: One's brown, one's red.
Oh
/colourblind Tongue

koopaul Wrote:If your wondering, Paratroopa's icon is official. I took it from his Mario Power Tennis emblem seen on his racket.

I don't know what Paragoomba is but because Paratroopa has the same bat in the Baseball games I would assume they'd have the same emblem.
Mm, m'kay.
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#42
Koopa. Tough skins, but once you get past them, they're actually very juicy inside...

Uh, never mind. Nice sprite, Koopaul.
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#43
Hmm, that's a nice little gimmick, having thier Japanese katana on top of thier US names.
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#44
Haha, nice. I didnt see your last one on your old topic. Raphael Raven is pretty good. And all the enemies from Yoshi's Island.
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#45
Nice, katakana below the sprite... only... you made a lot of mistakes. You forgot to add dakuten (the '') in Kuribo (Goomba) and Patakuribo (Paragoomba). Also, your 'ta' is wrong. It should have a horizontal slash inside the three slashes. The 'pa' in Patapata (Paratroopa) is lacking a han dakuten (the °) and your 'ge' in Jugemu (Lakitu) looks like a 'gu'. The 'pu' in Choropuu (Monty Mole) looks like a 'bu' because it looks like a dakuten. You wrote Gesso (Blooper) as "Gu'nn" because your 'ge' looks like 'gu' (said before) and 'so' looks like a 'n'. Also, you could make the sokuon (small tsu) smaller.
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