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Pokemon - Alakazam, Hitmonlee, Chikorita
#16
Yey Cute

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I will just fix the wings and then animate the bat!
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#17
I WANT TO LEARN HOW TO ANIMATE WINGS. PLEASE.

I really need help with the wings of the bat flying.

I really need help with the wings of the knight flapping.
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#18
Okay, so basically, treat the wings just like arms. When the wings move down, push the character up, and vice versa for down.

I don't know if that's helpful at all, but wings are essentially just special arms. That spike on the top of the wing is like a thumb, and the other parts radiating out from there are like open fingers. So I'm guessing you could just bend over a bit and flap your own arms to simulate something similar.

But I've never done wings much either.
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#19
But is there any reference I can use for such animation?

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Anyway, I redid the mushroom.
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#20
someone made a thread for the same purposes noot long ago here at sprite discusion, you might want to check it.
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#21
Thanks for that. I'll probably make a wing animation soon.

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Am I late for Pokemon?
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#22
the pose is ALL WRONG for alakazam. the shading and colors look okay but... the pose.. and anatomy...
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#23
I'll probably make a better pose soon. For now enjoy Chikorita and Hitmonlee.

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#24
Nobody like?

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#25
(04-15-2010, 10:26 AM)Rhymey Wrote: the pose is ALL WRONG for alakazam. the shading and colors look okay but... the pose.. and anatomy...

LISTEN TO THIS BEFORE MAKING MORE

just a tip!
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#26
I'm not making more because I might stop with 3 Pokemon.
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#27
THEN LISTEN TO THE ADVICE BEFORE I BREAK YOUR FACE IN
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#28
I'm not much of a spriter, but I'll try to help.

Alakazam looks like he was just shocked with lighting, and that's not a compliment. Make his pose less... less... whatever it is right now. Less stiff, maybe? He looks as if he needed to go for a poop. His right hand also looks really bad, try fixing the position of the fingers. There's a perspective problem with the spoons which can likely be fixed by shading. You've got some anatomy problems going on (in relation to an official Alakazam), but I'm afraid I can't pinpoint exactly how you can fix that.

Lee's bended leg looks as if it was pasted in front of him rather than what you were trying to go for. Again, I'm bad at pointing out exactly what's wrong, but at least you know what's the problem now. >.>

As for Chikorita, you really need to completely redo her. Her face is 100% flat, she's cross-eyed, her head is too big compared to her body, the leaf on top looks like rubber, and her body shading needs work. One of her legs has excessive black in it, too.

Hope it helps you out.
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#29
(04-17-2010, 11:25 PM)Black Jack Wrote: THEN LISTEN TO THE ADVICE BEFORE I BREAK YOUR FACE IN

What is your problem geez.
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#30
the anatomy on them all still sucks. why bother posting if you're not going to listen to what people tell you?
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