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#1
I fancied doing some Pokémon of my own after checking out 1up's thread. But Pokémon is more or less an on/off trend on TSR.
Anyway I've started Nidoking:
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I'll be thinking of ways to make this a bit more personal in style. Thanks for looking and responding!
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#2
Really nice shape, can't wait to see how it comes out when it's been shaded.
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#3
The only thing I don't like is the inconsistency between the calves and the lopsidedness of the abdomen. Otherwise, it's good.
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#4
[Image: nidoking.png]
Is this better? I'll get on with the shading.
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Shading attempt, I think this will kill the sprite if I do this everywhere, maybe if I get rid of the lightest shade it shouldn't look too bad. Plus the volume I tried to create sucks bad so that'll need to be fixed.
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#5
if thats's suposed to be a wrestling stance, then its all screwed up in the arms
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#6
N'yeah, not a fan of the shading. :\
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#7
that checkered pattern isn't working because it's making the shoulder's shape look flat. Texturize it, but don't forget to shade the shape normally.
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#8
yeah the arms look pretty weird to me, might be because they aren't shaded but they look far too skinny for nidoking.
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#9
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Started shading guideline. What do you think?
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#10
his body needs to be shorter and more husky. his legs don't jut out like that.
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#11
Also as seen by the ref picture, his belly should be much fatter. Almost like he has a beer gut.
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#12
Thanks a bunch dudes, I was using that pic as a ref but not well enough!
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#13
Also I think his lower arms (the parts with the hands) need to be bigger. In the ref, they appear to be about 1.5x the size of the smaller part.
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#14
Actually there was a number of things about the anatomy and pose I wanted to comment on , but I'm lazy so I just made a quick edit

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#15
Now how about some pointy ears for my favorite Pokemon ever? Smile You may wanna make him crouch an itsy bitys more. Wink
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