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I got in touch with an old friend of mine who is now making indie games for cash and he was interested in my hammer game idea.. wait, did I already tell you guys that? Well anyways, it'll be a few weeks till we can start on anything series, so in the mean time, I'm thinking about trying some different styles for fun.

This one is obviously still a WIP, but I like the general idea and the larger size.
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Ah, that looks a lot better. It's much more stylistic and the larger outline seems to give it a cleaner effect. Good work.
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(03-25-2010, 06:57 PM)Dex Wrote: Ah, that looks a lot better. It's much more stylistic and the larger outline seems to give it a cleaner effect. Good work.
Thanks. I'm going to rethink the colors a bit since this one is more cartoony and should probably have more cheerful colors.
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OH GOD THE THANK BUTTON IS BACK

the bigger sprite is hella nice c:
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(03-25-2010, 07:53 PM)Chaoxys Wrote:
(03-25-2010, 06:57 PM)Dex Wrote: Ah, that looks a lot better. It's much more stylistic and the larger outline seems to give it a cleaner effect. Good work.
Thanks. I'm going to rethink the colors a bit since this one is more cartoony and should probably have more cheerful colors.

Well, the only color I think you should change is the dark blue of the helmet to the same black of the T-shirt.
Boo!
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Well, l already changed the hat's colors, but then the pants colors looked too dark so I made them more red and it actually looked nice.
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FFFFFFF Ignore her body I'm still working on it. I made her boobs too big... again. That and the body as a whole sucks as of right now. just C+C on the head please.
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the boy looked better when he had angry eyes- at the top of the page
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Not sure how to respond to that aside from, sorry for making him with more than one emotion?
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(03-27-2010, 10:42 PM)Chaoxys Wrote: [Image: newbs.png]
FFFFFFF Ignore her body I'm still working on it. I made her boobs too big... again. That and the body as a whole sucks as of right now. just C+C on the head please.

this is adorable, but the tits are way too big again
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She basically has no neck, and her head is too far on the right
Her eyes are quite hard to read at 1x

made an edit, hope you don't mind
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Tried to fix what I said before plus some other stuff, like changing the shape of her head slightly to make it feel more feminine
I also changed the color of her hair because I actually liked it the way you had it on the smaller version

hope this is somewhat helpful, if not, just ignore me
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I'm going to jump in this bandwagon and edit her a little bit

I didn't think Vic's mouth wasn't that good so I tried my hand at it. not really sure about my version too

also, I reduced her tits again and gave her wristbands

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(03-29-2010, 10:14 AM)*Gorsal* Wrote: I'm going to jump in this bandwagon and edit her a little bit

I didn't think Vic's mouth wasn't that good so I tried my hand at it. not really sure about my version too

also, I reduced her tits again and gave her wristbands

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I like that, although I want to make a few changes.
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I like the new style, it shows more of the character then it was before
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glub glub

I still need to make designs for the main bad guy and the main characters rival.
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