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Enemy concept sprite
#16
...aaand where's OP? :o
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#17
Oh hello, well nice edits guys! They tought me quite a bit, I'll update later on, and start on animations. Thanks for the suggestions and visual aids!
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#18
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Neslug's was cool, so I redid mine after his since it reminded me of how I used to sprite(even though you all used to yell at me for spriting like that), used an old pallete from a cancelled game of mine and fuzzy's. But now I feel like I ripped of Neslug. If it's to similar I'll run through again. C+C is appreciated.
Edit: Dang it double posted.
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#19
I'm liking it, although it does look quite a bit like Neslug's. One thing, the pink you chose for a highlight is actually darker than the surrounding colors, so lighten up.
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#20
This better? [Image: enemyconcept.png], I think I'll keep it in this style, it's pretty fun to pixel in. I know it looks like neslugs but at the same time it doesn't as much as I thought it did.
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#21
stop abusing aa

it makes the entire thing look shitty

also, there is no reason you need 18 colors for that thing
why do you have 18 colors on that thing
i can see the need for maybe 7 or 8
in fact i'll make a quick edit in a second to show what i mean but


god damn how do you have that many colors
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#22
(02-18-2010, 04:50 PM)lord gold Wrote: stop abusing aa

it makes the entire thing look shitty

also, there is no reason you need 18 colors for that thing
why do you have 18 colors on that thing
i can see the need for maybe 7 or 8
in fact i'll make a quick edit in a second to show what i mean but


god damn how do you have that many colors

To be honest I have no idea how I came to that many damn colors, I just stopped counting after 3. Damn I really need to start seeting some color limits.
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#23
I count 13 colors, but that's still too many.
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#24
graphicsgale counts 18 on yours

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mine has 9
learn2less colors


also, some of the changes i made were purely stylistic choices, but my original point stays the same
aa less
didn't mention this in the last post either but
i found around 4 separate lightsources on yours
fix that too



e: didn't really mess with your lineart much other than some issues i had with the faceular area

probably could have dicked around with the area around the brow a bit more though, that's bugging me
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#25
Thanks for the visual aid, really helps point out how many flaws I had. I'll keep everyone's advice in mind next pixel, especially 1up's it was a major help.
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