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Mortimers Amateur Spriting Attempt
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A little edit, the far leg looks much shorter than the near one, even considering isometric view, so you should extend it. The vertical lines make his legs look stiff, you should emphasize the most noticeable details of the leg, which I would say are the calves, the ankles and the big toe of the foot. Do the same for the arms, the elbows are definitely something you need to define. What kind of pose are you aiming for anyway, something idle or something more dynamic?

The legs are also pretty close together, which looks unstable (despite his spread out arms) although that might just be a side effect of the mismatched leg lengths.

You also have those two pixels pushed inwards on the torso, which gives the figure a very feminine hourglass shape, if I hadn't read your posts I would have guessed it was a female. (It is a male, right? RIGHT?! Surprise)
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Mortimers Amateur Spriting Attempt - by Mortimer - 02-25-2012, 11:15 PM
RE: Mortimers Amateur Spriting Attempt - by x0_000 - 03-07-2012, 04:43 AM
RE: Mortimers Amateur Spriting Attempt - by Gors - 03-08-2012, 06:50 AM

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