Tarkan809 (Player?)

[tarkan809]

here's the fixed sheet:

Im gonna go out of a whim and say that this is actually pretty bad.
Firstly, we have a colour pallete. Your sprites use none of the colours on it. I'd suggest you go back and look at it.
Secondly, while it's good your character is within the 64x64 limit (for the msot part), he's a tad small.
Thirdly, from what little shading there is, it's either pillowshaded (bad) or has no shading or depth at all.
Fourth, so much stolen content. It's okay to reference things, but this is just flat out stealing srites from other games that don't even resemble the style of TFR.
Fithly, your character is literally the green bird from the angry birds movie. Sheesh.

I'd highly reccomend reading through this and redesigning your character, or at the very least, create original attack sprites and fix his colour pallete.

well... i redesigned my character:




but i accedently made it bigger.

i hope it's good...