I'm sorry but; the humor is that of a 4th grader if even that(how old are you, really I'm just curious), the paneling is poorly done and furthermore this look like all of 5 minutes of effort were put into them. I think you really need to work harder on these.
But hey I'm glad you stopped making sprite comics or whatever it is you did before this(I didn't see them) because that's a big step in the right direction.
EDIT: The cursing is really unnecessary. It's not adding anything or increasing emotion, so it's just like you're using it for "OH GEE GOLLY GOSH I CAN USE CURSE WORDS, BATMAN!"
But hey I'm glad you stopped making sprite comics or whatever it is you did before this(I didn't see them) because that's a big step in the right direction.
EDIT: The cursing is really unnecessary. It's not adding anything or increasing emotion, so it's just like you're using it for "OH GEE GOLLY GOSH I CAN USE CURSE WORDS, BATMAN!"