I'm sorry but; the humor is that of a 4th grader if even that(how old are you, really I'm just curious), the paneling is poorly done and furthermore this look like all of 5 minutes of effort were put into them. I think you really need to work harder on these.
But hey I'm glad you stopped making sprite comics or whatever it is you did before this(I didn't see them) because that's a big step in the right direction.
EDIT: The cursing is really unnecessary. It's not adding anything or increasing emotion, so it's just like you're using it for "OH GEE GOLLY GOSH I CAN USE CURSE WORDS, BATMAN!"
(08-15-2012, 11:20 AM)м▲я✞H Wrote: [ -> ]I'm sorry but; the humor is that of a 4th grader if even that(how old are you, really I'm just curious), the paneling is poorly done and furthermore this look like all of 5 minutes of effort were put into them. I think you really need to work harder on these.
But hey I'm glad you stopped making sprite comics or whatever it is you did before this(I didn't see them) because that's a big step in the right direction.
EDIT: The cursing is really unnecessary. It's not adding anything or increasing emotion, so it's just like you're using it for "OH GEE GOLLY GOSH I CAN USE CURSE WORDS, BATMAN!"
Yeah...I'm 22 years old...I forgotten to not post this....(stupid)...by the way that's how that character speaks...I can be nice...but don't want to be! Why? Too people done me wroung...but I'm glade you're being honest about this! That's what I like to hear! Thanks! I can do better then this...this here is an old comic I had on one of my machines,so I decided to send it! I'm on the works of making a game with this character,whitch will be better then this sad crap! Anyways,I'll just leave the comics to the experts
tsk...gotta get going...some fool keeps on looking at me...gonna have to puch his lights out! Stay cool!
Well, even the experts had to start somewhere. As Marth pointed out, you've already improved, you just have to continue putting the effort in improving in.
Wha?? Are you joking Virt? I can't tell :U
I didn't think you were younger than I am.
He is really 13. Amazing, isn't it?
hey you all, there is no point showing your comic off in others' threads. Please stop derailing the thread.
![[Image: hXWkZ.png]](http://i.imgur.com/hXWkZ.png)
