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KYoujin's works
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Needs more contrast and a bunch of lines need to be cleaned, there are several jaggies (eg Yoshi's nose, neck, butt). Moreover I'd suggest not to use a pure black outline here.
Yoshi's arm is too straight, give him an elbow. He also lacks some hips, the legs just dop out of his body.
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KYoujin's works - by kyoujin - 06-26-2012, 09:17 PM
RE: KYoujin's works - by kyoujin - 07-13-2012, 11:13 PM
RE: KYoujin's works - by Previous - 07-14-2012, 04:17 AM
RE: KYoujin's works - by Garamonde - 07-14-2012, 11:09 AM
RE: KYoujin's works - by kyoujin - 07-14-2012, 02:01 PM
RE: KYoujin's works - by Speed-X - 07-14-2012, 04:31 PM
RE: KYoujin's works - by kyoujin - 07-15-2012, 05:26 PM
RE: Sasuke Riding Yoshi from super mario bros. - by Previous - 06-27-2012, 12:11 AM
Yoshi Portrait - by kyoujin - 06-29-2012, 01:05 AM
RE: Yoshi Portrait & The Tengu - by Sengir - 06-29-2012, 10:56 PM
RE: Yoshi Portrait - by Hoeloe - 06-29-2012, 01:42 AM
RE: Yoshi Portrait - by kyoujin - 06-29-2012, 01:53 AM
RE: Yoshi Portrait - by Previous - 06-29-2012, 02:23 AM
RE: Yoshi Portrait - by kyoujin - 06-29-2012, 02:57 AM
RE: Yoshi Portrait - by NICKtendo DS - 06-29-2012, 03:13 AM
RE: Yoshi Portrait - by kyoujin - 06-29-2012, 03:29 AM
RE: Yoshi Portrait - by Cobalt Blue - 06-29-2012, 08:23 AM
RE: Yoshi Portrait - by kyoujin - 06-29-2012, 02:46 PM
The Tengu - by kyoujin - 06-29-2012, 08:29 PM

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