04-10-2012, 01:15 PM
the lineart is all really rough, you should get rid of all the jaggies
the anatomy isn't great either plus he's leaning back quite far so he's unbalanced
you should give him a steadier pose
the scarf shading isn't really conveying a scarf - i would suggest getting drapery references even though this guy's scarf is floaty.
the animations seem pretty good so far though so keep at it!
the anatomy isn't great either plus he's leaning back quite far so he's unbalanced
you should give him a steadier pose
the scarf shading isn't really conveying a scarf - i would suggest getting drapery references even though this guy's scarf is floaty.
the animations seem pretty good so far though so keep at it!
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